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The challenge
of satire is sustainability. More so when it is intended to mirror contemporary
society. The most effective showcase of the allegorical art is brevityshort
pieces or stories that readers can instantly, and easily, connect to current
events. The full-length satirical novel is, understandably, a considerably
more challenging enterprise, which explains why it is not such a commonly
attempted form of fictional writing. Moreover, the author is not a professional
writer: he is an investment consultant, and though he has penned musicals
and a Hindi short story, this is his first work in English.
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THE CHRONICLER'S
DAUGHTER
BY KISHORE THUKRAL
RAVI DAYAL
PRICE: Rs 300
PAGES: 360 |
He seems to have taken his literary inspiration from George Orwell. His
fictional state, U Belly, is near-utopian, the only blot on the landscape
of peace and prosperity marred by the chroniclers daughter who is
physically different from the rest, being slim and not rotund, and the
only one who questions the air of complacency and the machinations of
the Elders, the governing group of Wise Men. Predictably, they try and
neutralise her and (shades of V.P. Singh) it backfires: her popularity
grows, she attracts converts to her cause and overthrows the Elders.
Enter the only superpower around, bringing money and glamour and a charismatic
Clintonesque president. In an ending that will gladden the hearts of Harkishan
Singh Surjeet, Jyoti Basu and the Swadeshi brigade, external influences
lead to corruption and decay with everything being overturned, including
the father being pitted against the daughter. Whether the twists and turns
are for dramatic effect or for making a statement on the current economic
and political climate is unclear. This book is really like a broken mirror,
fragmented images that are fleetingly recognisable but they somehow fail
to come together as one composite portrait. Its the kind of book
you put down after a chapter or two and only pick up again to find out
what happens next, not because the plot is powerfully allegorical enough
to keep the literary momentum going.
However, the authors command of the language is commendable and
parts of the book make for a delightful read. Sadly, its the literary
equivalent of a curates egg; the bad parts spoil the enjoyment of
the good. The flaw lies in stretching the allegorical inference too far
rather than keeping it tight and more powerful. The result is that halfway
through, it becomes somewhat predictable, a chronicle foretold.

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